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    素质教育篇
    (一)
    根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
    假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动,倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报,你们班交换生peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他海报上交的时间,并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
    提示词语:design,safety
    rule,careful,protect,picture
    提示问题:when
    should
    you
    hand
    in
    the
    poster?what
    would
    you
    like
    to
    share
    with
    peter
    about
    designing
    the
    poster?
    dear
    peter,
    i'm
    glad
    to
    receive
    your
    email
    ______________________________________________________________________________________
    __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    if
    there
    is
    anything
    more
    that
    i
    can
    help
    with,
    please
    let
    me
    know.
    yours,
    li
    hua
    【写作思路】
    这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给peter写一封邮件,告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知,短文中应包括以下内容:首先告诉peter海报上交的时间;然后和他分享一些设计海报的想法。第二个内容应该是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容,学生们应联系自己的实际生活,展开合理的想象,将这些内容补充完整后,用正确的英语表达出来,这是写作中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意:首先要合理安排短文内容,叙述应有层次、有条理。可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语,如first,
    second,
    last
    but
    not
    least等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达,英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的,因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译,应该从句式的整体考虑,先确定主干结构,然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次,应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意上下连贯,表达流畅。
    【满分范文】
    dear
    peter,
    i'm
    glad
    to
    receive
    your
    email.
    as
    it
    is
    required,you
    are
    supposed
    to
    hand
    in
    the
    poster
    before
    next
    friday.
    being
    your
    close
    friend,i
    am
    extremely
    willing
    to
    share
    some
    ideas
    about
    designing
    the
    poster
    with
    you.
    first
    and
    foremost,the
    basic
    safety
    rules
    are
    of
    great
    importance,which
    should
    be
    included
    in
    your
    poster.
    in
    the
    second
    place,following
    the
    safety
    rules
    is
    so
    meaningful
    and
    crucial
    that
    you
    had
    better
    remind
    your
    readers
    of
    its
    significance
    and
    advise
    them
    to
    be
    careful
    both
    in
    and
    out
    of
    school.
    last
    but
    by
    no
    means
    least,if
    i
    were
    you,i
    would
    add
    a
    few
    suggestions
    about
    safety
    awareness,considering
    that
    better
    safe
    than
    sorry.
    in
    addition,it
    is
    a
    good
    idea
    for
    you
    to
    draw
    a
    few
    pictures
    on
    your
    poster
    so
    as
    to
    make
    it
    more
    lively
    and
    acceptable.
    if
    there
    is
    anything
    more
    that
    i
    can
    help
    with,
    please
    let
    me
    know.
    yours,
    li
    hua
    【名师点评】
    这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,给peter写邮件,告诉他制作主题海报的一些事情。短文有以下几个优点:首先文章内容完整,结构清晰,符合题目要求。除题目中给出的开头和结尾,短文主要包括两个内容:第一段用一句话告诉peter上交海报的时间;文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上,这一段中作者和peter分享了一些制作海报的想法。主要从四个方面进行阐述,内容非常详实,并使用了first
    and
    foremost,
    in
    the
    second
    place,
    last
    but
    by
    no
    means
    least,
    in
    addition等短语,分清了这一段的层次,叙述非常有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,并使用了较复杂的句式结构,表现了作者较强的语言运用能力。短文中较好的句型有:being
    your
    close
    friend,i
    am
    extremely
    willing
    to
    share
    some
    ideas
    about
    designing
    the
    poster
    with
    you.、in
    the
    second
    place,following
    the
    safety
    rules
    is
    so
    meaningful
    and
    crucial
    that
    you
    had
    better
    remind
    your
    readers
    of
    its
    significance
    and
    advise
    them
    to
    be
    careful
    both
    in
    and
    out
    of
    school、in
    addition,it
    is
    a
    good
    idea
    for
    you
    to
    draw
    a
    few
    pictures
    on
    your
    poster
    so
    as
    to
    make
    it
    more
    lively
    and
    acceptable.等。

    (二)
    日前某校进行了题为“有压力向谁说”的问卷调查(结果如图),请你根据要求写一篇英语短文参加该校的征文活动。向老师倾诉
    向朋友倾诉
    向家长倾诉
    不跟任何人说
    内容包括:1.
    简要描述调查结果;
    2.
    你喜欢向谁倾诉压力?为什么?
    3.
    提出2条缓解压力的建议。
    要求:1.
    文章必须包括所给要点,但不要逐条翻译,可进行适当拓展;
    2.
    书写规范,80—100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
    3.
    文中不得出现真实校名、人名。
    when
    teens
    have
    stress,
    they
    will
    talk
    about
    their
    stress
    to
    different
    people.
    here
    are
    the
    results
    about
    our
    survey.
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    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【满分范文】
    when
    teens
    have
    stress,
    they
    will
    talk
    about
    their
    stress
    to
    different
    people.
    here
    are
    the
    results
    about
    our
    survey.
    thirty-five
    percent
    of
    students
    will
    talk
    about
    their
    stress
    to
    their
    teachers,
    forty
    percent
    of
    students
    will
    talk
    to
    their
    friends,
    only
    fifteen
    percent
    of
    students
    talk
    to
    their
    parents
    but
    only
    ten
    percent
    of
    students
    talk
    to
    nobody.
    for
    me,
    i
    like
    to
    tell
    my
    friends
    about
    the
    pressure,
    because
    we
    are
    all
    the
    same
    age,
    they
    sometimes
    feel
    the
    same
    as
    us
    .and
    we
    can
    communicate
    with
    and
    understand
    each
    other
    easily.
    but
    as
    a
    student,
    we
    should
    learn
    to
    relieve
    stress.
    first
    of
    all,
    we
    should
    properly
    face
    the
    pressure.?stress
    is
    everywhere
    in
    our
    daily
    life,
    so
    we
    can't
    be
    afraid
    of
    them
    and
    try
    our
    best
    to
    deal
    with
    them.
    secondly,
    we
    can
    listen
    to
    light
    music
    or
    do
    some
    proper
    sports,
    which
    can
    let
    us
    relax.
    finally,
    believe
    in
    yourself.
    we
    should
    believe
    in
    ourselves.
    we
    can
    deal
    with
    any
    trouble
    with
    the
    help
    of
    ourselves
    or
    others.
    stress
    is
    everywhere
    and
    we
    must
    face
    the
    pressure
    properly.
    【解析】
    1.
    题干解读:本篇文章属于话题性+图表型作文,根据图表内容说明不同的人对压力的诉说对象不同的情况,文中会较多的使用数字说明,做一个对比,然后阐述自己的压力喜欢对谁说以及原因,并且提出该如何缓解压力的几条建议。建议可以从自身实际出发,自己平时是如何缓解压力的可以一起分享。
    2.
    例文点评:文章采取三段式,第一段对图表内容进行阐述,以及阐述自己喜欢向谁诉说压力和为什么?第二段主要给出一些缓解压力的建议,第三段做一个总结,概括压力无处不在,但是要正视压力。文章结构完整。段落衔接很好,语言表达清晰准确,语句简单易懂。
    3.
    高分亮点:
    短语:talk
    about;the
    same
    as;communicate
    with;deal
    with;be
    afraid
    of。
    句型:so引导的并列句;because引导的原因状语从句;
    (三)
    xxxx呼吁:“共同呵护好孩子的眼睛,让他们拥有一个光明的未来”,为此,学校
    广播站邀请你写一篇关于保护视力的倡议书,请根据以下信息写一篇文章:


    1.
    越来越多的孩子带上了眼镜;2.
    超过
    70%的初中生近视;3.
    父母和老师为此担忧;


    1.
    学习;2.
    电子产品;3.
    缺少睡眠;


    1.
    每天至少做两次眼保健操;
    2.
    多进行户外运动;
    3.
    健康饮食;
    ……
    视力差:have
    poor
    eyesight
    要求:
    1.
    所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息,并适当发挥;
    2.
    文章不少于
    90
    词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
    3.
    语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
    4.
    文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
    poor
    eyesight
    is
    a
    serious
    problem
    among
    the
    youth
    of
    our
    country.
    it’s
    amazing
    that
    the
    situation
    is
    going
    from
    bad
    to
    worse.
    it
    is
    time
    that
    we
    take
    the
    problem
    seriously.

    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【满分范文】
    poor
    eyesight
    is
    a
    serious
    problem
    among
    the
    youth
    of
    our
    country.
    it’s
    amazing
    that
    the
    situation
    is
    going
    from
    bad
    to
    worse.
    it
    is
    time
    that
    we
    take
    the
    problem
    seriously.
    at
    present,
    more
    and
    more
    students
    wear
    glasses,
    over
    70
    %
    of
    the
    middle
    school
    students
    have
    poor
    eyesight.
    both
    parents
    and
    teachers
    are
    worried
    about
    it.

    here
    are
    some
    main
    causes.
    first,
    some
    students
    spend
    too
    much
    time
    reading
    or
    doing
    their
    homework
    without
    a
    rest.
    second,
    some
    students
    even
    like
    to
    watch
    tv
    or
    use
    computers
    for
    a
    long
    time.third,
    some
    students
    may
    not
    have
    enough
    sleep.

    in
    order
    to
    have
    good
    eyesight,
    we
    should
    do
    eye
    exercises
    at
    least
    twice
    a
    day.
    we
    can
    also
    try
    to
    do
    more
    sports
    in
    our
    spare
    time.
    we
    had
    better
    eat
    healthy
    food.
    of
    course,
    it
    is
    important
    to
    have
    a
    good
    habit
    of
    using
    our
    eyes.
    for
    example,
    we
    shouldn’t
    read
    in
    the
    sun
    or
    in
    bed.

    i
    think
    all
    of
    us
    should
    understand
    the
    importance
    of
    protecting
    eyes
    and
    try
    our
    best
    to
    protect
    them.
    【解析】
    题干分析:这是一篇要求写一篇关于保护视力的倡议书,响应xxxx呼吁:“共同呵护好孩子的眼睛,让他们拥有一个光明的未来”,观察提示表格,写作内容要包括目前的现在,还有产生这些问题的原因,已经提出的相关建议。
    例文点评:这是一篇优秀的例文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确的运用的时态,例文中运用的是一般现在时。例文第一段首先提出了目前我国青少年视力不良的社会问题;第二段详细的介绍了产生问题的三点原因;第三段提出有效的建议,号召保护视力。例文还使用了一些亮点词句,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
    高分亮点:
    短语:at
    present目前;more
    and
    more越来越多;be
    worried
    about担心;too
    much太多;like
    to
    do
    sth喜欢做某事;in
    order
    to
    sth为了做某事;at
    least至少;try
    one’s
    best
    to
    do
    sth尽某人最大努力做某事;eye
    exercises眼保健操;in
    one’s
    spare
    time在某人空闲时间。
    句型:(1)first,
    some
    students
    spend
    too
    much
    time
    reading
    or
    doing
    their
    homework
    without
    a
    rest.
    sb.
    spend
    time
    (in)
    doing
    sth某人花费时间做某事;(2)of
    course,
    it
    is
    important
    to
    have
    a
    good
    habit
    of
    using
    our
    eyes.
    it
    is
    adj.
    (for
    sb.)
    to
    do
    sth(对某人来说)做某事时怎样的。
    (四)

    假如你是李华,你的表妹lily面对即将到来的期末考试,压力很大,这几天甚至出现了失眠的状况,请你给她写一封电子邮件,帮助她尽快调整好状态迎接考试。
    提示词:
    relaxed;
    music;
    exercise;
    believe
    in
    要求:
    1.
    参考提示词,可适当发挥
    2.
    语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
    3.
    文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名、地名等)
    4.
    词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
    dear
    lily,

    __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    yours,li
    hua
    【满分范文】
    dear
    lily,
    i'm
    sorry
    that
    i
    heard
    from
    you.
    i
    think
    proper
    pressure
    is
    normal,
    because
    exams
    are
    important
    for
    us.
    this
    happened
    to
    me.
    let
    me
    tell
    you
    about
    my
    advice.
    you
    can
    do
    something
    you
    like
    to
    relax
    yourself.
    for
    example,
    i
    like
    to
    listen
    to
    music
    because
    some
    soft
    music
    can
    help
    us
    relax.
    i
    exercise
    regularly
    to
    increase
    my
    ability
    to
    work
    under
    pressure.
    we
    have
    to
    learn
    to
    believe
    in
    ourselves.
    if
    you
    think
    these
    suggestions
    is
    good
    for
    you
    ,you
    can
    have
    a
    try.
    i
    hope
    my
    suggestions
    can
    help
    you.
    yours,li
    hua
    【解析】
    1.题干解读:该题目属于信件写作,要求根据来信写回信,信件内容应该完整地给出相关建议,帮助她尽快调整好状态迎接考试。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
    2.例文点评:这是一篇优秀的例文,完整地给出相关缓解考试压力的建议,避免出现累赘。例文结构清晰,行文连贯,恰当地运用了副词和连词等用以过渡,增强了整篇文章的逻辑关系。
    3.高分亮点:词组:heard
    from;proper
    pressure;my
    advice;relax
    yourself;soft
    music;exercise
    regularly;believe
    in
    ourselves;is
    good
    for等;
    句型:
    i
    think
    proper
    pressure
    is
    normal,
    because
    exams
    are
    important
    for
    us.
    /let
    me
    tell
    you
    about
    my
    advice./for
    example,
    i
    like
    to
    listen
    to
    music
    because
    some
    soft
    music
    can
    help
    us
    relax.
    /if
    you
    think
    these
    suggestions
    is
    good
    for
    you
    ,you
    can
    have
    a
    try
    ./i
    hope
    my
    suggestions
    can
    help
    you.
    【点睛】
    书面表达:
    首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达,例如heard
    from;proper
    pressure;my
    advice;relax
    yourself;soft
    music;exercise
    regularly;believe
    in
    ourselves;等;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅,如however;最后,要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
    (五)
    今年3月5号学雷锋纪念日,你校组织志愿者去夕阳红敬老院开展“学雷锋,送温暖”活动。假如你是学生张华,请将活动情况介绍给你的美国笔友ben,分享这次美好的经历。
    活动时间
    3月5日
    活动地点
    夕阳红敬老院(xiyanghong
    nursing
    home)
    参加人员
    学校志愿者活动内容
    1.
    送鲜花和水果

    2.帮助打扫卫生
    3.……
    活动感想
    1.关爱和尊重老人2.
    ……..要求:
    (1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
    (2)必须包括表格中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
    (3)词数:100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
    (4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
    dear
    ben,
    thank
    you
    for
    your
    last
    email.
    let
    me
    tell
    you
    what
    we
    did
    in
    our
    school
    on
    march
    5.
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    i'd
    like
    to
    hear
    about
    volunteering
    work
    in
    your
    school.
    best
    wishes,
    zhang
    hua
    【满分范文】
    dear
    ben,
    thank
    you
    for
    your
    last
    email.
    let
    me
    tell
    you
    what
    we
    did
    in
    our
    school
    on
    march
    5.
    as
    soon
    as
    we
    got
    to
    xiyanghong
    nursing
    home,
    people
    there
    gave
    us
    a
    warm
    welcome.
    the
    elderly
    people
    were
    very
    excited
    to
    see
    us.
    we
    brought
    some
    flowers
    and
    fruits
    to
    them.
    then,
    we
    cleaned
    the
    windows
    and
    swept
    the
    floor
    for
    them.
    after
    that,
    some
    of
    us
    took
    a
    walk
    with
    them,
    chatted
    with
    each
    other
    and
    some
    of
    us
    played
    chess
    with
    them.
    when
    it
    was
    time
    for
    us
    volunteers
    to
    leave,
    they
    were
    thankful
    for
    our
    kindness
    and
    they
    felt
    somewhat
    sad.
    i
    promise
    to
    myself
    that
    i
    will
    go
    to
    see
    them
    whenever
    i'm
    free.
    we
    should
    care
    for
    the
    elderly
    people
    and
    respect
    them.
    i'd
    like
    to
    hear
    about
    volunteering
    work
    in
    your
    school.
    best
    wishes,
    zhang
    hua
    【解析】
    1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文,你校组织志愿者去夕阳红敬老院开展“学雷锋,送温暖”活动。假如你是学生张华,请将活动情况介绍给你的美国笔友ben,分享这次美好的经历。。首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
    2.例文点评:本文时态为一般过去时态,人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
    3.高分亮点:
    短语:as
    soon
    as

    get
    to;give
    sb.
    a
    warm
    welcome;bring
    sth.
    to
    sb.;take
    a
    walk
    with
    sb.;be
    thankful
    for…
    句型:as
    soon
    as
    we
    got
    to
    xiyanghong
    nursing
    home,
    people
    there
    gave
    us
    a
    warm
    welcome.;when
    it
    was
    time
    for
    us
    volunteers
    to
    leave,
    they
    were
    thankful
    for
    our
    kindness
    and
    they
    felt
    somewhat
    sad.
    (六)
    寒假即将来临,你一定有你的寒假计划吧?你校英语俱乐部开展了以“my
    plan
    for
    the
    winter
    holiday”为主题的征文活动,请根据下面的思维导图,写一篇英语短文向英语俱乐部投稿。

    寒假计划
    学习
    1.功课(作业、复习)
    2.阅读(类型、原因)
    兴趣
    1.运动
    2.艺术
    其他
    1.旅游
    2.要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
    2)必须包括…中所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
    3)词数:100
    词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
    4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
    my
    plan
    for
    the
    winter
    holiday
    winter
    holiday
    is
    coming.
    here
    is
    my
    plan
    for
    the
    winter
    holiday.
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】
    my
    plan
    for
    the
    winter
    holiday
    winter
    holiday
    is
    coming.
    here
    is
    my
    plan
    for
    the
    winter
    holiday.
    first,
    i’ll
    keep
    on
    doing
    some
    sports
    such
    as
    playing
    ping-pong
    and
    running.
    i
    think
    they
    are
    good
    for
    my
    health.
    next,
    i
    hope
    to
    relax
    by
    reading
    some
    books
    and
    watching
    tv.
    what’s
    more,
    i
    must
    finish
    the
    exercises
    left
    by
    teachers,
    because
    i
    will
    go
    to
    see
    my
    grandparents
    with
    mom
    and
    dad.
    i
    miss
    them
    very
    much.
    so
    do
    they.
    finally,
    i
    would
    like
    to
    travel
    somewhere
    interesting
    with
    my
    parents.
    probably
    i’ll
    go
    to
    hainan.
    i
    want
    to
    enjoy
    the
    beautiful
    beaches
    there.
    this
    is
    my
    plan
    for
    the
    winter
    holiday.
    i’m
    looking
    forward
    to
    my
    happy
    winter
    holiday!
    【解析】
    题干解读:本题列出了详细的思维导图,可以根据这篇思维导图来完成自己的文章,可以按照思维导图的形式来分段,本文是写自己的寒假计划,所以时态注意要用将来时。
    例文点评:本文按照自己的顺序详细地描述了自己的寒假计划,过渡词用的很好,并且时态也是根据作者所需作出了适当的变化,条理清晰,文笔流畅。
    高分亮点:
    短语:keep
    on;good
    for;what’s
    more;would
    like
    to
    句型:i
    miss
    them
    very
    much.
    so
    do
    they.
    finally,
    i
    would
    like
    to
    travel
    somewhere
    interesting
    with
    my
    parents.
    (七)
    write
    at
    least
    60
    words
    on
    the
    topic“weekend
    or
    not?“according
    to
    the
    information
    given.(阅读以下内容,并以
    “这是汤姆的周末吗?“为题写一篇不少于
    60
    个词的短文,标点符号不占格.)
    如今,很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末,如下图中的
    tom,请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法,以
    weekend
    or
    not?为题写一篇不少于
    60
    个词的英语短文,向
    parents
    杂志投稿,让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发.要求:
    1.简单描述“tom“的周末状态、提出你的具体想法并给出建议;
    2.短文中不得出现“tom“以外的人名或任何校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分.
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【满分范文】
    weekend
    or
    not?
    tom
    has
    to
    attend
    lots
    of
    classes
    at
    weekends.
    he
    has
    little
    time
    for
    his
    favorite
    sport﹣soccer.
    still,
    his
    parents
    are
    pushing
    him
    to
    do
    more
    math
    exercises,
    which
    worries
    him
    a
    lot.(要点一,汤姆的周末)nowadays,
    many
    students
    are
    under
    much
    pressure
    like
    tom.
    their
    parents
    believe
    it
    is
    necessary
    for
    them
    to
    make
    full
    use
    of
    the
    weekends
    and
    learn
    as
    much
    as
    possible(高分句型一).

    as
    a
    result,
    some
    students
    are
    stressed
    out
    and
    therefore
    lose
    interest
    in
    learning
    anything.(高分句型二)
    what
    is
    worse,they
    may
    not
    be
    able
    to
    learn
    to
    manage
    their
    own
    life.(要点二,大多数孩子的周末)
    i
    do
    hope
    all
    the
    children
    can
    have
    the
    freedom
    to
    choose
    what
    they
    like
    to
    do
    and
    enjoy
    their
    weekends.
    (要点三,自己的观点)
    (八)
    为抗击新型冠状病毒(ncp),此次寒假我们必须呆在家里,假如你是alice,作为九年级1班的班长,请给你班的同学们写一封信.建议他们不要烦躁,可以在家做一些放松的活动来保证身心健康,并针对如何在上网课期间,取得更大进步给予建议.
    写作要点:
    1.
    不要焦虑,我们将尽快重返校园.
    2.
    可以在家进行放松的活动:
    (1)阅读,听音乐,下棋.
    (2)室内活动(如做眼保健操).
    3.
    针对如何在上网课期间,取得更大进步,给予同学们建议.
    写作要求:
    (1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名.
    (2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯.
    (3)字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰.
    (4)至少80词.
    dear
    classmates,
    how
    is
    everything
    going?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________

    best
    wishes!
    yours,
    alice
    【满分范文】
    dear
    classmates,
    how
    is
    everything
    going?
    don't
    worry.
    it's
    a
    special
    winter
    holiday
    because
    of
    ncp.
    everyone
    must
    stay
    at
    home
    to
    prevent
    it.we
    will
    go
    back
    to
    school
    as
    soon
    as
    possible.(不要焦虑,我们将尽快重返校园)
    i
    think
    reading,
    listening
    to
    music
    or
    playing
    chess
    can
    make
    you
    relax
    if
    you
    feel
    depressed
    and
    bored.
    【高分句型一】spending
    some
    time
    doing
    indoor
    exercise
    is
    necessary,
    such
    as
    doing
    eye
    exercises.(在家进行放松的活动)
    in
    the
    special
    period,
    online
    teaching
    is
    carried
    out
    every
    day.
    you
    are
    supposed
    to
    be
    on
    time
    on
    weekdays.
    it
    is
    necessary
    for
    you
    to
    have
    a
    quiet
    learning
    environment.【高分句型二】clean
    up
    any
    distraction
    on
    the
    table
    before
    class.
    during
    the
    class,
    write
    down
    the
    key
    points
    of
    the
    knowledge
    and
    the
    difficult
    parts
    that
    you
    don't
    understand.
    you
    can
    ask
    for
    advice
    through
    wechat,
    qq
    or
    other
    ways
    as
    soon
    as
    possible.
    while
    studying
    hard,
    don't
    forget
    to
    exercise.
    stretching
    your
    body
    is
    also
    useful.(针对如何在上网课期间,取得更大进步,给予同学们建议)
    we
    believe
    winter
    will
    finally
    pass,
    and
    spring
    is
    sure
    to
    come.
    i'm
    looking
    forward
    to
    seeing
    you
    soon.
    best
    wishes!
    yours,
    alice
    (九)
    近日,某校开展了“志愿者日“的活动,鼓励同学们利用周末走出校园,尽自己所能为所在的社区做一些力所能及的事情。并随机给100名同学发放了调查问卷,下图是调查问卷的统计结果。
    go
    to
    old
    people
    home
    visit
    sick
    children
    in
    the
    hospital
    clean
    up
    the
    parks
    in
    the
    community

    请你用两段话写一篇短文,第一段简要说明图表内容,第二段从图表中选出符合你实际的一项,结合自己的经历,谈谈你的志愿者日是如何度过的。
    要求:1.词数不少于80词;
    2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
    recently,
    a
    survey
    was
    done
    among
    100
    students
    in
    a
    school
    about
    how
    students
    spent
    the
    volunteer
    day
    on
    weekends.
    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________
    【满分范文】
    recently,
    a
    survey
    was
    done
    among
    100
    students
    in
    a
    school
    about
    how
    students
    spent
    the
    volunteer
    day
    on
    weekends.
    here
    is
    the
    result.
    25%
    of
    the
    students
    chose
    to
    help
    clean
    up
    the
    parks
    in
    the
    community.
    30%
    of
    the
    students
    spent
    their
    weekends
    visiting
    sick
    children
    in
    the
    hospital.
    (高分句型一)nearly
    half
    of
    the
    students
    went
    to
    old
    people’s
    home
    to
    visit
    the
    old
    people
    there.(简要说明图标内容)
    last
    sunday,
    i
    went
    to
    old
    people’s
    home
    with
    my
    friends
    lucy
    and
    sam.
    we
    cleaned
    the
    rooms
    for
    the
    old
    people
    and
    told
    them
    many
    interesting
    things
    in
    our
    school.
    they
    told
    us
    stories
    about
    the
    past
    and
    how
    things
    used
    to
    be.
    lucy
    and
    i
    are
    both
    good
    at
    singing,
    so
    we
    sang
    for
    them.
    they
    were
    so
    happy
    and
    sang
    along
    with
    us.
    an
    old
    grandpa
    also
    taught
    us
    how
    to
    play
    kung
    fu.(高分句型二)
    sam
    likes
    telling
    jokes
    and
    his
    jokes
    made
    the
    old
    people
    laugh
    happily.
    it
    was
    a
    really
    meaningful
    sunday.(结合自己去敬老院的经历)
    in
    a
    word,
    volunteering
    is
    really
    a
    great
    experience
    for
    us.
    we
    can
    get
    such
    a
    strong
    feeling
    of
    satisfaction
    from
    helping
    others.(总结与心得)
    (十)
    某校正在开展“走进新时代,争当合格中学生“的演讲比赛,请以“we
    act,we
    improve“为主题,写一篇演讲稿,谈谈中学生除了学习课本知识之外,还应该做些什么?
    演讲稿应包括以下内容:
    (1)学会自立,诚实友善,举止文明;
    (2)培养习惯,发展兴趣,不断创新;
    (3)关心他人,和谐相处,懂得感恩;
    (4)……
    要求:(1)要点齐全,并适当发挥;
    (2)文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名;
    (3)卷面整洁,书写美观,可适当加
    2﹣3
    分;
    (4)词数:90
    词左右.开头部分已给出,不计入总词数.
    ladies
    and
    gentlemen,
    we
    have
    entered
    a
    new
    area.as
    students,______________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【满分范文】
    ladies
    and
    gentlemen,
    we
    have
    entered
    a
    new
    area.
    as
    students,
    it’s
    our
    duty
    to
    study
    hard.
    but
    to
    be
    a
    qualified
    middle
    school
    student,
    i
    think
    we
    have
    a
    lot
    of
    things
    to
    do.(点题)
    first,
    we
    should
    learn
    to
    be
    independent
    and
    honest.
    we’re
    supposed
    to
    be
    friendly
    to
    others
    and
    behave
    politely
    in
    public.【高分句型一】
    second,
    we
    should
    have
    good
    habits.
    habits
    play
    an
    important
    role
    in
    our
    life.
    we’d
    better
    develop
    our
    interests
    and
    the
    ability
    to
    create.
    【高分句型二】third,
    we
    should
    care
    more
    about
    others
    and
    be
    thankful
    to
    all
    the
    people
    who
    have
    helped
    us.
    value
    the
    time
    we
    spend
    with
    our
    family
    and
    friends
    in
    our
    daily
    life.
    last
    but
    not
    least,
    i
    think
    we
    should
    exercise
    more
    to
    keep
    healthy.(应该做什么)
    in
    a
    word,
    the
    more
    we
    act,
    the
    better
    we
    will
    improve.(总结全文)
    (十一)
    中学生课后活动丰富多彩,你最喜欢的是什么,请选择其中一项,根据以下提示,以“an
    after-school
    activity“为题,写一篇
    80
    词左右的短文,与同学们分享。
    要点:1.你最喜欢的课后活动是什么,及课后活动的时间、地点;
    2.谈谈其给你带来的益处;
    3.你的建议。
    要求:1.内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范。
    3.文中不能出现人名、校名或地名,否则不予评分。
    an
    after-school
    activity
    there
    are
    many
    after-school
    activities.
    i
    like
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    【满分范文】
    an
    after-school
    activity
    students
    in
    middle
    schools
    have
    many
    kinds
    of
    after﹣school
    activities.maybe
    they
    do
    sports,go
    hiking,watch
    tv
    or
    surf
    on
    the
    internet.even
    some
    students
    put
    all
    their
    free
    time
    into
    studying
    the
    textbook
    knowledge.but
    my
    favorite
    after﹣school
    activity
    is
    collecting
    stamps.let
    me
    tell
    you
    the
    reason.(我最喜欢的课外活动)
    first,i
    can
    learn
    a
    lot
    from
    the
    stamps.there
    are
    many
    chinese
    cultures
    in
    the
    stamps【高分句型一】.when
    i
    collect
    them,i
    can
    learn
    more
    about
    my
    motherland【高分句型二】.second,i
    can
    make
    more
    friends.many
    students
    love
    collecting
    stamps.because
    of
    the
    same
    hobbies
    and
    interests,we
    can
    talk
    and
    do
    the
    same
    things.then
    we
    can
    be
    good
    friends.(带来的益处)
    in
    a
    word,after-school
    activities
    can
    make
    us
    relax.you
    can
    take
    up
    a
    hobby
    that
    you
    like.
    why
    not
    join
    in
    it?(建议)
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